It was field trip day at Lincoln Memorial Elementary School, and all the kids had been excitingly waiting to get to the museum. The kids followed Ms. Loretta off the bus and she halted before entering the museum.
"Now, need I remind all of you we are entering a museum. We must follow closely with our gracious tour guide and remain polite and courteous as to not to disturb other museum-goers. I am looking at you, Alex," Ms. Loretta brows furrowed and her crows-feet covered eyes fell to the seemingly angelic child by her side. Alex appeared to be a sweet and innocent child, but he was truly a chaotic ball of energy. So much in fact that no other child was allowed to be his field trip buddy. Ms. Loretta assumed the role so she could keep her eye on him.
The class entered the museum and immediately the kids fell into a state of amazement. Light cascaded through the large skylight above them and fell upon the enormous Tyrannosaurus rex skeleton sitting the main lobby. Standing directly below the T-rex was a man in a navy-blue blazer and a stiff bow-tie covered in little mummies. He stood with an enthusiastic grin plastered across his face. His voice pierced Ms. Loretta's ears and echoed throughout the corridor.
"Welcome Lincoln Memorial Elementary School to the American Museum of Natural History! You are visiting us on a special day. Not only will you be getting to participate in our usual thrilling exhibits, but you will also get to enjoy our NEW Arabian Nights exhibit, which is only here for a limited time," he recited as if he was reading it off a hidden teleprompter, "now, before moving into our first exhibit let me remind you of a few museum rules, which if followed carefully will give everyone a more enjoyable museum visit-"
Before even getting to the first rule, Alex had already climbed on the T-rex and was attempting to pull the large leg off. Luckily Ms. Loretta pulled him off quickly enough before any real damage was done but suffered a large run in her panty-hose. She hand remained gripped around Alex's arm as Michael proceeded to run down the list of extensive museum rules.
"Now, let's jump back in time and rediscover our pasts!" Michael did a small animated jump he had rehearsed a number of times before.
With every exhibit they entered Michael would lower his voice, and glide slowly through every row of artifacts neatly laid out. And with every exhibit, Alex would attempt to disrupt Michael and provoke Ms. Loretta. In the paleontology exhibit, he climbed into the caveman exhibit and swung from the stage vines. In the oceanography exhibit, he managed to jump into a display pool of fake fish. By the astronomy exhibit, he was on lockdown. He was forced to sit between Ms. Loretta and Michael, and if he moved one step out of line he would be sent straight to the bus.
"We are now entering our final exhibit of the day. Our Arabian Nights exhibit. Discovered by archaeologists over the past several years, we have collected A TON of ancient artifacts and are excited to share these stories with you," Michael began on a long-winded monologue of every small piece they walked by. As Michael excitedly yammered on about every small piece, whether it had a significant backstory or not, Alex slowly drifted away from the group. He wandered across the exhibit where he stumbled upon a small bronze lamp.
"OH. It looks like someone has gotten away from the group," Michael said coming up behind Alex," Even though he was told specifically to not wander off," he said under his breath.
"What is this?" Alex questioned.
"That is a genie lamp once belonging to the mythological Prince Aladdin. It is said he was a scrappy young boy who caused nothing but trouble, sound familiar?" Michael joked, but Alex was not amused. "Um anyway, according to the legend a genie is said to live in the lamp, and one day a man tricked Aladdin into hunting down the lamp and risking his life to get it. He refused to give it to the man, so he left Aladdin for dead in a cave. However, when Aladdin rubbed the lamp this great genie flew out it and granted Aladdin any wish he desired. He wished to go home where he fell madly in love with a princess. He then wished to be a wealthy prince so he could marry her. But the princess was promised to another the Sultan's right-hand man's son. It angered the Sultan's right-hand man when his daughter ran off with Aladdin, and the vizir didn't trust Aladdin had come from all this wealth. Then the man who tricked him into getting the lamp appeared, so he could take the lamp back," Michael was antsy to get through the tour and rushed this words. "So he stole back the lamp and wished Aladdin's palace and princess away, but through a lot of fighting and trickery Aladdin won her and his palace back and they lived happily ever after. The end," Michael turned ready to wrap up the tour.
However, Alex excitedly went to rub the lamp for he needed to know if the genie would appear, but Michael was quick and halted him before he could reach it.
"Woah, woah now. Although this is a thrilling legend it is just that a legend. It's not real. The lamp is however very old and should not be touched."
Then as Michael stood up he knocked the podium and the lamp came crashing to the ground. Alex lept at it, but instead of vigorously rubbing it he handed it back to Michael. Michael took it and carefully placed the lamp back on the podium.
"Whew, that could've ended very dif-"
Before Michael could finish his sentence the ground began to rumble and the museum shook. Smoke poured from the lamp and out came out a large and frightening genie.
"What wouldst thou with me? I am the Slave of the Lamp, and will obey thee in all things."
To be continued...
Caption: Aladdin with the Genie obtained from mythfolklore.blogspot.com
Bibliography: The Arabian Nights' Entertainments by Andrew Lang and illustrated by H. J. Ford (1898)
Author's note: I pulled inspiration from the Aladdin story mixed with kind of a Night at the Museum storyline. I wanted to add some humor to the story, and also kind of recreate another troublesome character like Aladdin was when he was young.
Oh Aladdin, Prince Ali of Babwah? I think. I loved how you mixed Aladdin and a Night at the Museum (I love museums in general, I am a history nerd). I can totally picture this happening here at OU's natural history museum. though I have not seen anyone climb the t-rex or mammoth I bet I know a few boys growing up that would love to try if they would have gotten the chance. I Especially liked how the genie appeared at the end and Michael was careful to give the lamp back instead of starting to rub it to see if the genie would appear.
ReplyDeleteAs soon as I read the title I knew I would have to read this story, and it did not disappoint at all! As I was reading through I began to wonder what this sounded like besides the story of Aladdin, and then near the end I finally realized it was Night at the Museum. I think you did a great job pulling information from each story line and combining it to form a fluid plot line. I think the characters you included were developed fairly well, but I wonder if you thought about giving Michael a little more of a background? I feel like it would be really neat if you created a plot twist where he ended up being Aladdin and he was trapped in present times with amnesia or perhaps he was made to be the guardian of the lamp. Those are just some idea I thought of while reading! Overall this was really enjoyable to read and I think it would be an awesome story to continue writing about.
ReplyDeleteOh wow this story was one of my favorites I've read! The museum setting is really fun and modern, and I really enjoyed the dialogue between Alex, Michael, and Ms Loretta. I’m really glad you said To Be Continued, because it’s evil to end a good story on that cliffhanger! I wish there was a little more conversation from the other students in the class, but overall I loved it.
ReplyDeleteHey Sammie! Great rendition of the story of Aladdin. I loved how you brought it to today and made it seem so natural how they came to discover the genie. I really enjoyed how you almost faked us out by having Alex get caught before rubbing the lamp but in the end finding out what was inside at the end. Very creative and a great way to tell a story we have all heard so many times before.
ReplyDeleteHello Sammie! I really liked what you did with your story! I actually read Aladdin and the Wonderful Lamp for this week’s reading so it was fun to read this story which was related to the original. I really liked the ending and how you put to be continued because it keeps me wondering on what is going to happen like who rubbed the lamp and is getting the wishes from the genie and also what kind of wishes will be made? What if the one who rubbed the lamp ended up being a descendant of Aladdin himself, that would be crazy or what if the wish maker asked to go back in time to when Aladdin first got the lamp and messed up the timeline creating a whole different future for Michael and Alex! Overall I really enjoyed reading this story and can't wait for the second part of it, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI thought this was such fun mix of stories. I also love Aladdin, I think it is so fun and creative while also being a fun story that we have grown up with. I wanted to keep reading more - I thought it was cool that instead of it actually being in the story it was a museum where they got to learn about it. I hope to read more in the future with the to be continued. I want to know more!!!
ReplyDeleteHey Sammie! What a creative story! You wrote this story in such a unique way! Also, this was an easy story to follow, which is always a plus. I have always loved Alladin, and I thought it was cool the way you incorporated it into the end of the story. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Nicely done!
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